FUN with my new TOK

Good concept, but you need to refine the camera positioning. Also it may help to edit out the slow spots. Mind you I'm a complete noob with regards video editing, but I used to watch TV!

With a bit of tweaking, your shoots could be educational and entertaining. Right now, I feel like I'm missing the weapon/shooter dymanics. And watcing a target w/o detail isn't viewer friendly.

But I think you've got the right idea!

Here's one a friend did:

It's an unintentional view of a malfunction in different speeds and w/ a bit of humor (?) thrown in:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rRLDr...layer_embedded

It needs a little fleshing out yet to describe what's going on, but the pace is good, and it focuses on certain operations.

This one (dramas rectified) is pretty simple and hopefully leaves you wanting more. One of these days, I gotta try this myself, but it'll probably very technical (nerdy!).:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dO-te...layer_embedded

Hoping to see more video from you, if you can stand it! (Sorry! Critics- we got it easy...))