The top one isn't even close. The flame only has three sections, the cannon muzzles are too square, the cannon balls are the wrong size, the buckle is way off, the G and S are too skinny and the H is too wide. The periods are the wrong size and placement, the S is too skinny, the crossbar on the A is too high and the shape of the cannons is wrong too. That's about all I can see wrong with the top one.